![]() |
China DOS Union-- Unite DOS · Advance DOS · Grow DOS --Union site: www.cn-dos.net Forum site: www.cn-dos.net/forum |
| Guest | Log in | Register | Members | Search | China DOS Union |
|
中国DOS联盟论坛 The time now is 2026-08-25 21:22 |
47,812 topics / 349,910 posts / today 0 new / 48,264 members |
| 贴图灌水、文学娱乐专区 » Written for My Beloved |
| Printable Version 1,052 / 13 |
| Floor1 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“I”
Give me a lonely summer noon So I may savor that cup of clear tea When the osmanthus buds are about to slowly grow drunk I ask Give me a lonely summer noon My beloved may walk into that conifer grove The cicadas in the conifer grove cry The cicada song in the conifer grove is A dark green all of longing Last night In the grove mottled with moon shadows My beloved, with snow-white skirts and jet-black hair, and eyes like autumn waters, moved softly through it Give me a lonely summer noon So I may go see that first-blooming lotus By the pond where the bank grass lies dim and forlorn There is my my beloved, beautiful as poetry, and understanding as a flower that speaks |
|
| Floor2 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“II”
At dawn I saw a whole pond of misty rain Only then did I know I have wandered to the ends of the earth for you These few bouts of midnight haste and the melancholy after them I always dream that in the moonshadow among the clouds, you have new white hairs for me When the deep night gradually fades The cuckoo has finished crying Outside the curtain the grass is green again And at this moment, I know your snow-colored cheeks must bear traces of tears Please forgive me, my beloved I cannot I cannot personally —wipe them away for you You, my sleepless one, are the lotus in my years In the days when you and I had not yet met even a whole garden of roses held no flower of mine |
|
| Floor3 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“III”
In a former life, you were that pleasure-loving woman on the Han River In a former life, I was that man on the Han bank seeking your pendant After you vanished in an instant Buddha pitied my deep longing And so, in the thousands of years that followed if you are the wind I am the rain if you are the moon I am the cloud if you leave behind a stretch of emptiness I will stand still for a thousand years in wild devotion You of former years, were you also dressed in white, fair as snow, like this? You of former years, did you also wear such long hair, dark enough to shame ink? And in this life at the moment when the night mist first rises you are the nameless flower in this night that understands words I am the light dewdrop on your petals and leaves condensed from a thousand years of wishes At the moment when the night mist first rises I long to gently draw you into my arms |
|
| Floor4 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“IV”
My love, did you hear last night the croaking frogs by the green-grass pond My love, did you hear last night the chill pulse of my heart after that frog-song My love, did you imagine last night the fallen flowers drifting in the wind My love, did you imagine last night the desolation after the flowers fell Thinking of you at this moment through all the years, all the years to come —thinking of you, you are the one waiting quietly within my wordless tears Your little boat is on the river where the moon hangs My love, if you if you are turning back now turning back to those days when we walked together beneath the moon I will, I will cherish you well Longing is a blue moon it shines on me and shines on you My love, are you at this moment also thinking of me in tender tender pulses |
|
| Floor5 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
Do not adorn feeling with heartlessness / even now / still pitying the flower’s shadow / one person alone cannot make a scene / still less walk alone / one thread of parting sorrow / how much idle grief / ten thousand kinds of feeling / let the green peaks gather / do not delay the message from the beauty / if unspoken / then let mountains and waters be the pledge / entrusted to others to bring
|
|
| Floor6 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
The curtain lifts on the fresh green of the splendid courtyard / the wind in a few strands of willow silk / besides, the tryst before the lamp / and yesterday’s drizzling night rain /
so much / so much / only asking after the broken chrysanthemums in the clay pot |
|
| Floor7 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“V”
Once there was rain, wandering bringing down the lingering grace of “Han Guang” from a thousand years ago Beloved, my thoughts of you together with this dream-curtain grow dim —dimly so At this time, my love, I want to hear your voice like zither music I want to hear every beat within your heart I want to see your eyes like a deep pool I want to see the tenderness now in your eyes Time will halt at this moment with a gentle heart bright eyes romantic poems Time will begin at this moment with drifting flowers a shining moon hands folded in prayer My love, you do not know how bright the moon is tonight What I have shed for you is far more than flower petals |
|
| Floor8 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“VI”
Last night, who made me look at the sky full of stars, and the stars were like your eyes The wind on the plain turned a new willow green This tryst is my long waiting Whenever a passerby goes by I, full of hope, keep turning my head And when I turn back I never see you, ah Beloved, my eyes become, like that night mist, equally light with sorrow Let me draw on this cigarette Though I know full well it cannot hold back my longing for you Still I want to watch that pale blue smoke slowly rise and gather into your beautiful, bashful face The flower of youth will pause for you The river flows right by my side Whose zither is sounding here beneath the flowers and before the wine cup Beloved, at this moment I spin my longing into an unbound wind thinking that in this way it can reach your side and stand there as a silent green pine |
|
| Floor9 如是大师 | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
“VII”
I sit here in June before this window overflowing with fragrance gazing past those walls grown thick with angelica grass Beloved, I can hear your drifting footsteps like night mist lingering somewhere There the little path is wild with moss and butterflies dance in fluttering grace Please wait for me to walk with you, beloved In such a dim forest you will not see a single morning star Beloved, please wait for me to walk with you You will be able to hear my footsteps drawing near You will be able to see my eyes blurred by longing Beloved, please wait for me wait for me to go with you side by side I stand here by this misty river waiting for you thinking far away of that dream borrowed in advance and so I stand here waiting until my white hair grows into clouds over a thousand xun red vines and crimson creepers winding over my body summer insects mingling with the boat-song I heard a fisherman rowing the river moon and his boat |
|
| Floor10 tdj | Posted 2003-12-21 00:00 |
| 银牌会员 Posts 332 Credits 1,131 | |
|
Not bad, but the tone is too low and melancholy. I'll give you a ci poem I wrote before:
Joy of Meeting Once I traveled ten thousand li on distant roads, through several springs and autumns. Do not sigh that aspirations are high while the years are short, the water flows east. A true man, with a vajra heart, clear and exquisite. The roc spreads its wings against the wind, a splendid future!!! |
|
| Floor11 如是大师 | Posted 2004-01-11 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
Not many people are replying.
That shows it wasn't written very well! |
|
| Floor12 allul* | Posted 2004-01-12 00:00 |
| 高级用户 Posts 167 Credits 612 | |
|
What the master wrote is so true and heartfelt, how could it be bad?
Please post more and share them with everyone. |
|
| Floor13 如是大师 | Posted 2004-01-12 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
|
I really want to write, but sadly I no longer have that kind of mood...
Thanks for allul*'s support! |
|
| Floor14 ko20010214 | Posted 2004-01-22 00:00 |
| 版主 Posts 1,628 Credits 7,296 | |
|
You really are a true master...
Just like what Electric Guitar Invasion wrote, “After reading this thread, I didn't reply right away, because I was afraid my vulgar and unbearable reply would sully one of the rare posts on the Internet. But I still replied, because I felt that if I couldn't leave my screen name behind such a wonderful post, I would not rest in peace even in death! How proud it is to be able to leave my screen name behind such a wonderful post! OP, please forgive my selfishness!” Ordinary people probably wouldn't dare reply. But I still replied, please forgive my selfishness, hehe... And let me quote one more line: “OP, you must keep working hard!” |
|
|
[ Contact the Union admin team -
中国DOS联盟 -
Standard version ] Sponsored by ifanr Inc | © 2001–2023 |