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| 贴图灌水、文学娱乐专区 » Chou Nu Er |
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| Floor1 沈洁 | Posted 2003-07-05 00:00 |
| 金牌会员 Posts 1,812 Credits 4,590 From 上海市 | |
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In youth I did not know the taste of sorrow,
I loved climbing high towers, loved climbing high towers, and to compose new verses, forced myself to speak of sorrow. But now I have fully known the taste of sorrow, I would speak, yet stop; would speak, yet stop, and only say, "What a fine autumn, how cool the air." Sorry, I haven't written it from memory in a long time, so I may have typed some characters wrong, please forgive me! |
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| Floor2 如是大师 | Posted 2003-07-06 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
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Hehe~~ 沈洁. Brother 如是 helped you revise it a bit... don't mind it.
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| Floor3 沈洁 | Posted 2003-07-06 00:00 |
| 金牌会员 Posts 1,812 Credits 4,590 From 上海市 | |
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Thanks, 如是!
But I changed it back again! Otherwise it would look too ugly! This is all the literary level I've got! |
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| Floor4 如是大师 | Posted 2003-07-06 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
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There are still mistakes... haha
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| Floor5 沈洁 | Posted 2003-07-06 00:00 |
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如是, please point them out!
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| Floor6 如是大师 | Posted 2003-07-11 00:00 |
| 元老会员 Posts 3,351 Credits 9,654 From 湖北 | |
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Fixed it for you
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| Floor7 ct | Posted 2003-08-07 00:00 |
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如是, not quite "suchness" after all; I always notice the problem is that a few of your lines were patched together, and it was also revised very
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