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Original Poster Posted 2003-07-05 00:00　·　 中国 湖北 武汉 硚口区 电信
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In youth I did not know the taste of sorrow,
I loved climbing high towers, loved climbing high towers,
and to compose new verses, forced myself to speak of sorrow.
But now I have fully known the taste of sorrow,
I would speak, yet stop; would speak, yet stop,
and only say, "What a fine autumn, how cool the air."


Sorry,
I haven't written it from memory in a long time,
so I may have typed some characters wrong,
please forgive me!











Floor 2 Posted 2003-07-06 00:00　·　 中国 湖北 武汉 电信
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Hehe~~ 沈洁. Brother 如是 helped you revise it a bit... don't mind it.
弄花香满衣，掬水月在手。
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Floor 3 Posted 2003-07-06 00:00　·　 中国 上海 电信
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Thanks, 如是!
But I changed it back again!
Otherwise it would look too ugly!
This is all the literary level I've got!
Floor 4 Posted 2003-07-06 00:00　·　 中国 湖北 武汉 电信
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There are still mistakes... haha
弄花香满衣，掬水月在手。
明月鹭鸟飞， 芦花白马走。
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青云碧空在，净瓶水不流。
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Floor 5 Posted 2003-07-06 00:00　·　 中国 上海 电信
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如是, please point them out!
Floor 6 Posted 2003-07-11 00:00　·　 中国 湖北 武汉 硚口区 电信
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Fixed it for you
弄花香满衣，掬水月在手。
明月鹭鸟飞， 芦花白马走。
我自一过后，野渡现横舟。
青云碧空在，净瓶水不流。
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Floor 7 Posted 2003-08-07 00:00　·　 中国 江苏 镇江 电信
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如是, not quite "suchness" after all; I always notice the problem is that a few of your lines were patched together, and it was also revised very
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