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贴图灌水、文学娱乐专区 » Back then I didn't understand the feeling of autumn

Floor1　x-y	Posted 2003-07-02 00:00
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Floor2　ko20010214	Posted 2003-07-02 00:00
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x-y wrote quite well. Looks like there are quite a few poets on our forum too. Hehe...

Floor3　yiyesong	Posted 2003-07-02 00:00
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KO, you should bring out whatever lamp of yours too. The OP's poem really is good, Greensleeves, hehe, sounds nice....

Floor4　ko20010214	Posted 2003-07-03 00:00
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I don't really have any great work, but lately I've been thinking about writing poetry. Because, you know, lots of people like qin, chess, calligraphy, and painting, but poetry and verse are just too hard... So today let's use poetry to make friends. This poem has been read by the chief editors of all the major newspapers and magazines, and they insist on publishing it. A good poem ought to be published. Also, Elder Guo, Ba Jin, Mao Dun, and Lao She, those old gentlemen, all read it too. My poem isn't well written, please don't laugh at me. With boundless courage, none may deceive, Zhang Fei shouted down Dangyang Bridge. Though it wasn't exactly a good deal, One night as husband and wife, a hundred days of grace. One line, one twist, wonderful, isn't it?!

Floor5　MYS	Posted 2003-07-05 00:00
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The OP's poem is good, it's just that the third line is awkward. “Rippling autumn waves follow the stars” is not very clear to me. If it were changed to “Autumn waves ripple, following the distant stars,” it would read more smoothly, but I don't know whether that would change the original meaning.

Floor6　如是大师	Posted 2003-07-05 00:00
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Haha... good.. ko's is good too... what a rare talent....

Floor7　ko20010214	Posted 2003-07-06 00:00
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*The following is quoted from 如是大师 on 2003-7-5 16:14:44:* Haha... good.. ko's is good too... what a rare talent.... After seeing this post: http://www2.zzu.edu.cn/ie/newdos/dispbbs.asp?boardID=7&ID=4549 download the crosstalk and listen to it, then you'll understand! Hehe...

Floor8　x-y	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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I think (ha, isn't that arrogant enough!....) the reason Chinese writing is so endlessly charming lies mainly in the beauty of its artistic conception, something other writing systems simply cannot compare with. Some things can be expressed in words, but their meaning cannot be forced out by effort. Moderator, please don't take offense. I don't want to change it, and besides, even if I changed it, it would be meaningless. I'm past that age already; I no longer have the heart or the strength for it.

Floor9　Dark-Destroy	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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Miss Green, your Chinese must be very good~

Floor10　x-y	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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Sorry, I feel like my face is getting hot. I'm ashamed!

Floor11　Dark-Destroy	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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*The following is quoted from x-y on 2003-7-7 11:53:49:* Sorry, I feel like my face is getting hot. I'm ashamed! My Chinese is really bad~

Floor12　x-y	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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You mean my Chinese is really bad?

Floor13　Dark-Destroy	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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*The following is quoted from x-y on 2003-7-7 11:57:31:* You mean my Chinese is really bad? Geez, I meant my Chinese is really bad~

Floor14　x-y	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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If you hadn't said so, I would've gotten dizzy. I really can't take a blow; I almost ran away on the spot.

Floor15　Dark-Destroy	Posted 2003-07-07 00:00
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Heh, don't misunderstand what I mean~

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