An awesome poem written by an expert after a breakup - China DOS Union Forum

　　Rage

　　Why

　　At dusk yesterday

　　I happened to run into her

　　Letting her slender jade hand

　　Be held by that loser

　　Smiling sweetly, chatting and glancing all around

　　Radiant and spirited, stepping lightly as if on ripples

　　Her beautiful eyes brimming with deep affection

　　Just like the year before last when she was with me on the lakeside path

　　Whispering in my ear and confiding in me the very same way

　　Now when she sees me she does not even nod, as if I were a total stranger

　　I find I still can't forget the old love, all six spirits in disarray

　　My eyes go blank, my feet take root, my heart feels as if it were being boiled in broth

　　A man as outstanding as me, and she always said I was too rustic

　　That bumpkin looks disgusting and acts vulgar, yet she loves his rudeness

　　Girls really are impossible to figure out; the more I think about it the more confused I get

　　I know perfectly well she and I were not suited to each other, and I want to forget her and start a new stove

　　But in the end it's all just something that cannot be cut apart, and the more you sort it out the messier it gets; nothing helps

　　Brother, I've grown this big and never been afraid of anyone, yet I fell over this one

　　Looks like I must have owed her a lot of money in a previous life; if I'd known it'd be like this I never should have tangled with her

　　Running into her was just my bad luck; next time no matter what I have to find a gentle girl to be with

　　At last I understand that in this world beauty can't be eaten as food, and often only leaves you burdened and embarrassed

　　From now on I'll be steady and earnest, diligent and conscientious, modest and prudent, polite to others, and protect public property

　　Remember when crossing the road to look both ways, use the pedestrian crosswalk, if you want prosperity have fewer children and plant more trees

　　Turn grief into strength, study hard while always being ready to help develop the great western part of our motherland

　　A real man need not worry about having no wife; without you I may be lonely, but at least from now on I won't let one leaf block my view

　　This has also made me reflect carefully on why I failed, sum up experience and lessons, and continue exploring the revolutionary road

　　I will meet a good girl and chase her like mad, think of her, love her, and never let her go, no matter whether she was born in the Year of the Tiger or the Rabbit

　　

　　Reply

　　

　　This ambitious young man is a good comrade; though heartbroken, he has not become listless or given himself up, quite possessing a man's bearing

　　Instead he has sharpened his eyes, stirred up his fighting spirit, and carried out a profound exposure of her ugly conduct and despicable face

　　Although he encountered a modern-day female Chen Shimei and was heartlessly abandoned, he did not blame fate or complain

　　Once again proving the penetrating thesis that class struggle will continue to exist for a long time within a certain scope

　　He has looked ahead to the basic road of the primary stage: the revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard

　　What is especially commendable is that this comrade has seriously reflected on himself and reached deep into his soul

　　Recognizing that those lakeside walks in the past were the grave mistake of petty-bourgeois sentimentality

　　He almost allowed himself to be misled by a pretty outward appearance and fell for the usual sugar-coated-bullet trick

　　Integrating theory with practice, after painful reflection he finally woke as if from a dream and realized he had almost lost his way

　　Beauty can't be eaten as food; beauty is not essence, not the whole of revolution

　　Though the language is plain, it reflects the sincere understanding of an ambitious young man

　　The criticism and self-criticism are deeply moving, truly words from the bottom of his heart

　　And he has even begun to nurture the lofty ambition of cultivating himself, regulating the family, governing the state, and bringing peace to all under heaven

　　This shows a repeated line of thought moving from this to that, from the surface to the inside

　　How can an outstanding young man like him be called rustic

　　Clearly it is that merely pretty woman who has eyes but cannot see

　　There are fragrant flowers everywhere at the ends of the earth; beauty need not be questioned for origin

　　A good horse does not eat the grass it has turned back to; do not cast vain looks at old love

　　A rabbit does not eat grass by its own burrow, thinking instead of three burrows

　　Within a hundred paces there are bound to be countless fragrant grasses

　　Perhaps one day she will become a discarded wife

　　Only then will she remember your good points

　　And come back to pour out her feelings to you again

　　But by then it will all be too late

　　You too will have your day

　　Dismiss her with contempt

　　Ignore her

　　Act cool

　　Cool

Floor1　NeverAgain	Posted 2008-02-24 02:59
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Rage 　　Why 　　At dusk yesterday 　　I happened to run into her 　　Letting her slender jade hand 　　Be held by that loser 　　Smiling sweetly, chatting and glancing all around 　　Radiant and spirited, stepping lightly as if on ripples 　　Her beautiful eyes brimming with deep affection 　　Just like the year before last when she was with me on the lakeside path 　　Whispering in my ear and confiding in me the very same way 　　Now when she sees me she does not even nod, as if I were a total stranger 　　I find I still can't forget the old love, all six spirits in disarray 　　My eyes go blank, my feet take root, my heart feels as if it were being boiled in broth 　　A man as outstanding as me, and she always said I was too rustic 　　That bumpkin looks disgusting and acts vulgar, yet she loves his rudeness 　　Girls really are impossible to figure out; the more I think about it the more confused I get 　　I know perfectly well she and I were not suited to each other, and I want to forget her and start a new stove 　　But in the end it's all just something that cannot be cut apart, and the more you sort it out the messier it gets; nothing helps 　　Brother, I've grown this big and never been afraid of anyone, yet I fell over this one 　　Looks like I must have owed her a lot of money in a previous life; if I'd known it'd be like this I never should have tangled with her 　　Running into her was just my bad luck; next time no matter what I have to find a gentle girl to be with 　　At last I understand that in this world beauty can't be eaten as food, and often only leaves you burdened and embarrassed 　　From now on I'll be steady and earnest, diligent and conscientious, modest and prudent, polite to others, and protect public property 　　Remember when crossing the road to look both ways, use the pedestrian crosswalk, if you want prosperity have fewer children and plant more trees 　　Turn grief into strength, study hard while always being ready to help develop the great western part of our motherland 　　A real man need not worry about having no wife; without you I may be lonely, but at least from now on I won't let one leaf block my view 　　This has also made me reflect carefully on why I failed, sum up experience and lessons, and continue exploring the revolutionary road 　　I will meet a good girl and chase her like mad, think of her, love her, and never let her go, no matter whether she was born in the Year of the Tiger or the Rabbit 　　　　Reply 　　　　This ambitious young man is a good comrade; though heartbroken, he has not become listless or given himself up, quite possessing a man's bearing 　　Instead he has sharpened his eyes, stirred up his fighting spirit, and carried out a profound exposure of her ugly conduct and despicable face 　　Although he encountered a modern-day female Chen Shimei and was heartlessly abandoned, he did not blame fate or complain 　　Once again proving the penetrating thesis that class struggle will continue to exist for a long time within a certain scope 　　He has looked ahead to the basic road of the primary stage: the revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard 　　What is especially commendable is that this comrade has seriously reflected on himself and reached deep into his soul 　　Recognizing that those lakeside walks in the past were the grave mistake of petty-bourgeois sentimentality 　　He almost allowed himself to be misled by a pretty outward appearance and fell for the usual sugar-coated-bullet trick 　　Integrating theory with practice, after painful reflection he finally woke as if from a dream and realized he had almost lost his way 　　Beauty can't be eaten as food; beauty is not essence, not the whole of revolution 　　Though the language is plain, it reflects the sincere understanding of an ambitious young man 　　The criticism and self-criticism are deeply moving, truly words from the bottom of his heart 　　And he has even begun to nurture the lofty ambition of cultivating himself, regulating the family, governing the state, and bringing peace to all under heaven 　　This shows a repeated line of thought moving from this to that, from the surface to the inside 　　How can an outstanding young man like him be called rustic 　　Clearly it is that merely pretty woman who has eyes but cannot see 　　There are fragrant flowers everywhere at the ends of the earth; beauty need not be questioned for origin 　　A good horse does not eat the grass it has turned back to; do not cast vain looks at old love 　　A rabbit does not eat grass by its own burrow, thinking instead of three burrows 　　Within a hundred paces there are bound to be countless fragrant grasses 　　Perhaps one day she will become a discarded wife 　　Only then will she remember your good points 　　And come back to pour out her feelings to you again 　　But by then it will all be too late 　　You too will have your day 　　Dismiss her with contempt 　　Ignore her 　　Act cool 　　Cool

Floor2　lxmxn	Posted 2008-02-26 03:22
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Interesting...

Floor3　luocling	Posted 2008-02-28 11:30
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Cool

Floor4　cndragon	Posted 2008-03-02 16:32
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Has a certain level of skill

Floor5　lily110	Posted 2008-03-04 12:45
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Haha

Floor6　haiou327	Posted 2008-03-10 01:38
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Skilled

Floor7　ko20010214	Posted 2008-03-25 15:43
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Brilliant, truly brilliant

Floor8　maidu	Posted 2008-03-25 16:28
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I'll take a look too

Floor9　lxhong	Posted 2008-03-25 16:36
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It really is kind of awesome, thanks for sharing.

Floor10　tangtai	Posted 2008-03-25 19:23
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Not bad, saved it!

Floor11　fengzi	Posted 2008-03-28 17:59
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Really awesome indeed```