(Original) Drunk on the Heart in a Snowy Night - China DOS Union Forum

Snowflakes whirl and dance,
softly tapping at the window frame,
those plum blossoms all over the sky gently stretching their branches,
are they the lucky stars you sent me?
I am intoxicated!!

My heart is restless,
thumping against my chest,
that rolling hot blood filling my whole breast runs everywhere,
it is my endless burning longing.
I am bathed in flames!!

My thoughts drift,
softly spreading across the night sky,
those flickering threads of phosphorescence lightly dancing,
telling of my deep yearning for you.
I am growing haggard!!

Wine,
is mellow;
the heart,
is drunk;
that richly intoxicating feeling of a drunken heart,
only you and I can savor it!!

Floor1　yiyesong	Posted 2003-05-30 00:00
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Snowflakes whirl and dance, softly tapping at the window frame, those plum blossoms all over the sky gently stretching their branches, are they the lucky stars you sent me? I am intoxicated!! My heart is restless, thumping against my chest, that rolling hot blood filling my whole breast runs everywhere, it is my endless burning longing. I am bathed in flames!! My thoughts drift, softly spreading across the night sky, those flickering threads of phosphorescence lightly dancing, telling of my deep yearning for you. I am growing haggard!! Wine, is mellow; the heart, is drunk; that richly intoxicating feeling of a drunken heart, only you and I can savor it!!

Floor2　李小龙	Posted 2003-06-05 00:00
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yiyesong, your free verse is written quite well.